Very simple animation, which just needs work. Not much people will understand this, I'm afraid. Good job though.
Liked the story, but the animation could use some work. Great music, and great use of colors. GReat job/
I for some reason didn't care as much about detail as i should have :) was my first actual submission to newgrounds so i gave myself room for less effort. Ty for the review~
Not really a story
but.. Good sprite animation, it was quite a basic point of view .. I reccomend using something like a V cam or something. Try adding some action like explosions and stuff that would make it better i think. Great job.
It's JURIAN! What's up Mr. Music Himself? :) Thanks for your review. I know, I really had no story, and no plot line whatsoever. But I've managed to remedy that in my sequel, so you're in luck :) I've said this in earlier reviews, but this was submitted in '05. Back in '05, I really don't think there was a V-Cam. I don't think there was, but I could be wrong, I don't know. But I searched all over for something like V-Cam, and I found absolutamente nada. I'll definitely do as you asked, because... you're all asking for the same thing! I'll give my viewers what they deserve :)
Thanks for your review. If you ever have any other suggestions, PM me with them or maybe even some advice! I look forward to reviewing more of your music, and you reviewing more of my flashes. :).
Good game with nice graphics, although some of the keys weren't quite logic. Good job
Good music, fitted good and the graphics were cool, but the diversity on the clothes was low. so the main, and only problem is that the diversity in everything is low, try working on that, other than that.. good job
It had some good music, which fitted the game, the graphics quality was real low, so try working on that. The hittest thing with the wall didn't really work, cause it was only the center of the pacman movie cli which registered hitting it, try working on that.
Very Relaxing, it would be real soft softcore... But i sure did enjoy this, it didn't had a lot of changes what was nice, and stupid athe same time. Try adding subtile changes, and try making one soft flute lead over it or something, i didn't really enjoy the snare sample u used in here. At 2:20 there were little buzzes like you put the volume a little too high. Good job.
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Well I agree with your stance on being repetive, but it already does have a lead (the organ). I dont really like the snare sample either to be honest, maybe I'll replace it with a different one. Also, I hear no buzzing around 2:20 so it might just be a your hardware vs my hardware problem. There is a soft clipper placed on the master and the song is generally quiet itself so there should be no clipping.
Thanks for the review, good feedback!
Real real cool.
I think i will make a lounge remix of billie jean now. i liked this composition. Maybe try adding some more changes in the instrumentation and such. Your singin was cool and stuff i liked the way you edited it. Great job.
but jet again. i don't like this too much because of the lack of melodies, there was no thing to hold on to cause it was arythmic so, try to be more subtile in adding different beats and such. Because this didnt really feel as one peace of music. Good job though.
Thanks for reviewing and i know that i dont make melodies i make more or less sounds but it seems people like them.
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