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Not Bad, not jazz

note: i'm not judging the way it fits the genre but the way it fits the genre.

The intro was good, with some good synth melody. The whole thing was quite repititive. Try making it loop better, cause this is a reason why people won't use it in their stuff. Good job,

Jurian

ShortMonkey responds:

Cheers. I don't know what genre it is so Jazz is the closest I could use

Great

Hi solus,
great song, did you actually play this on a keyboard or did you just like draw it in the piano roll? no matter what it sounds great. Good job.

PS: you should update the ctsg post.

SolusLunes responds:

Drawn up in my good friend piano roll.

And teh CTSG post has been updated.

Cool

I liked the piano, but the drums were a little too harsh, same for the tempo changes. Felt rocky. good job.

Jurian

GronmonSE responds:

The tempo changes were gradual to avoid making them too harsh, but, matter of opinion.

Thanks for the review!

The panning made me confused at some parts.

I don't have any complaints beside the panning. Try keeping like the bass, drum and one higher synth centered. Other than that GREAT JOB.

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks, man.

Nice

It needs some compression. but ok... I didn't like the transition from the fast part to the just strings part. You could work on variating on your drums, and get better samples. I liked all the parts of the song but the transitions were - as said- quite harsh. The whole song gets a little repititive although you have different parts try making like a chorus, refrain, bridge and somethng else to make more variations.

Assios responds:

Thanks for the tips :)

Nice

Nice song. It was a little repititive at some times, it would be better as a intro to the fight. Good job.

RyeGuyHead responds:

The last 30 seconds are where they are charging at eachother with swords.
Its supposed to build as an intro!

Good job.

it could use remastering and some variation and a real ending. Good job though.

knuxrouge responds:

Thanks!

Yayy.

Would fit great in a movie about a clown or something very joyfull. Could use some good remastering. Good job.

knuxrouge responds:

Okay, thanks.

Nice

The intro was a lil repititive but nice. The drumbeat was quite standard. Just a joyfull song overall. Good job.

FunkmasterCatking responds:

Yeah, I probably should have worked on the beat a little more.

Thanks!

Nice tune

I notice that you use lots of dissonants try adding them more subtile. It was a great tune with good samples and felt slow even with the fast beat. Very good job, maybe a lil'repititive.

Good job

WritersBlock responds:

dissonance? There's bugger all dissonance here, almost everything here is within the chord sequence, and everything's in the one key signature, no accidentals whatsoever. I'm glad you like it, I suppose that slow feeling comes from all the drawn out notes, and slow chord progression. Thanks for the review.

Hi, I'm Jurian! I don't use Flash. I only write and compose music. So please listen to my music and use it in your games and anims!

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