Jurian's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I Like to Hit Things]

Yayy

The beginning is nice and joyfull, but it got a lil' repititive in a way. I liked the tempo change you did. The second part you did was good. but repititive too. Very good job.

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks. I've updated it and mixed it up more now, so hopefully it sounds less repetitive.

[Driven to the edge]

Cool

This is a neat track with some good pad/string work in it. The build up in this song is quite slow try adding more variation in your song. It has some good riffs and stuff. So, Good job.

Rapture83 responds:

I wish I could but this ong was created over 4 years ago. I started out on a laptop a friend sold to me while I was deployed to iraq and I bought my first magix music maker program in Rota Spain. You can't transfer save files for that program from one computer to another. so the files are long since lost and gone. I expect for comments like this for my older stuff, it was still experimental and instructive to me back then. thank you though for your input.

[Warp away]

Nice

Nice sound it just doesn't feel like something finished just like a loop you have for a large composition, try making a long song with some more stuff. I just don't like all the short loop things you make, they aren't real interesting, could be me.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Heh, another critical review from the pro. I like the loops I make, haha, but that might just be me. Thanks for the feedback!

[Farewell Piano]

Nice, I love piano too

the beginning is very boring so try to work on that. You are a good piano player(or so it seems) Very good job, it's a bit boring maybe make better build up to some kind of a climax. Very good job though.

zompi responds:

Thanks for your opinion. I was always trying to make my works faster, but I'd prefer slow and peace music. But this review is a good motivation to do something more lively :)

[-last try-]

Nice=D

The beginning made me think of the song Anyplace, Anytime, Anywhere. It's very joyfull and makes me happy=D maybe make it a better loop by using the same sounds in the beginning and end.

howamisupposedtoknow responds:

well the melody is kind of the same in the beginning but the sound is different imo ^^ would rather make full songs but can't edit it anymore now...

[A Warm Feeling -loop-]

Good

sometimes it has a lack in quality and it doesn't loop good. You did a good job maybe make full version song. Cause this is real cool.

IceWave-Z responds:

i wont finish. but thx for the review.

[Talking To Myself]

Nice

Very nice song, the noise like guitar was very annoying cause I think it would be much cooler without is. You sing quite nice. Too much effects for my liking. But You did a great job on the other stuff:)

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LenardNotLenny responds:

Thanks.

[Man In the Smoking Mirror]

Nice

Not real DnB Though. Very spooky piano:) Good FX. Very slow developping of the song. So try working on more variation and faster developping other than that real good job.

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WritersBlock responds:

Yeah, it's not the typical drum and bass sounds, but I just worked with elements of the style, the breakbeats, the bass, mixed in with the FX and softer sounds. Yeah, it's a long song and it takes a while to get going, I suppose I didn't want to rush into it, I went for that creepy build up, but it is quite drawn out, so, I'll keep that in mind with future songs.

Cheers.

[~Terrestrial~ FULL]

Nice Ambient Flow

It got a bit repititive, could e used in a desert scene in an adventure style sumission. Good job,
Tips for next song:
A nice melody to top it.
A more complicated Drumbeat
More instruments.

Very Good job though.

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mariomusicmaker1 responds:

thankyou so much for the suggestions. altho i cant add more instroments because it already clips like madness and i have 21 already, i will take yours and others request for better drum beats to heart and hopefullly this will turn out even better thanks to you guys. thanks a bunch.

[Detonator]

aren't that garageband loops.

I could be mistaking so I'll be reviewing normally.

sounded real cool, It was very repititive. I liked the cowbell rythm. Good job on all the synths.

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FullyClothedMike responds:

As the Authors Comment says, it WAS done in GarageBand.
Why? Would you review if it differently if you had known this was made using it?
I tried to break up the repetition using the different instruments, and the breakdown in the middle, but I see what you mean.
Liked the cowbell, eh?
A lot of people who heard this when I was making it liked it as well, so I cranked it right up! XD
Thank you for the positive review. :)