Jurian's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Azure Eyes]

Cool...

Very Relaxing, it would be real soft softcore... But i sure did enjoy this, it didn't had a lot of changes what was nice, and stupid athe same time. Try adding subtile changes, and try making one soft flute lead over it or something, i didn't really enjoy the snare sample u used in here. At 2:20 there were little buzzes like you put the volume a little too high. Good job.

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S3C responds:

Well I agree with your stance on being repetive, but it already does have a lead (the organ). I dont really like the snare sample either to be honest, maybe I'll replace it with a different one. Also, I hear no buzzing around 2:20 so it might just be a your hardware vs my hardware problem. There is a soft clipper placed on the master and the song is generally quiet itself so there should be no clipping.

Thanks for the review, good feedback!

[Billie Jean Techno Remix]

Real real cool.

I think i will make a lounge remix of billie jean now. i liked this composition. Maybe try adding some more changes in the instrumentation and such. Your singin was cool and stuff i liked the way you edited it. Great job.

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MusicIsBliss responds:

haha thanks

[I dont know what it is]

Cool

but jet again. i don't like this too much because of the lack of melodies, there was no thing to hold on to cause it was arythmic so, try to be more subtile in adding different beats and such. Because this didnt really feel as one peace of music. Good job though.

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sistem69 responds:

Thanks for reviewing and i know that i dont make melodies i make more or less sounds but it seems people like them.

[i dont mow]

Quite nice

I liked the intro beat when i first heard it. But i didn;t expect it to repeat so often. it;s more industrial then video gameish i think. but it;s quite cool. Try adding more different rythms and melodies this felt a little bit empty sometimes.
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sistem69 responds:

well i think that this isnt my best music at all but i think ill start to use rithms with melodies thanks for reviewing.

[+After the Fallout+]

Great

Loved the piano, how did you make them? The violins sounded too synthy, may i reccomend using DSK strings, it's free and great. Loved the sax and loved the dreamy feel it gave. Maybe adding some orchestral percussion that would make it feel bigger you know. The ending could have been better but the song was great still.
Great Job.

Jurian

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks. The piano was a sample with added reverb and delay, I think that the violins would have sounded better with reverb, I used to use DSK strings all the time, but my computer hates it, and it sounds out of tune, most of the time, I'll probably just play with the soundfont to get a richer sound. Maybe I could have made a second half to the song, which has more of an epic apocalypse feel, but I just stuck with what I was comfortable with, so maybe later, I'll feel adventurous enough to blend jazz with a grander epic orchestra.
Thanks for the review.

[Toxic Snake]

Nice

NIce song with a great bass, I didn't really liked the stopping at every bar. Great ending though. Good job

Jurian

Assios responds:

Thanks! Glad you thought the song was nice ;D

[p4c-Revenge]

Nice rythms

really enjoyed every minute of this song, but it was too latin sometimes. The chimes were nice, and all the FX came together nicely. The beat was great, the looping wasnt. Sometimes it got repititive, not like you wereusing the same thing but in the same style a lot. Try adding like a real chorus or something. Great job.

Jurian

p4c responds:

hehe ill consider it, tho not the looping part--if someone wants a loopable version they can pm me or something, tho i think ill keep my songs as... you know... songs lol. thx for ur thoughts :)

[midnight party]

Good trance, maybe alittle unoriginal

The whole percussionwas good. Liked the fade out, but get rid of the FL samples. I found it real repititive in a way. Maybe because you didn't use much instruments.

Good job for a first trance.
Jurian

aldlv responds:

repetitive... yes...
is repetitive
unoriginal?... why?

[Stages of Death]

Not a hellish feel

Not a big fan of the dissonant notes in the synth, the pads sounded good. It doesn't feel like one track because of the transitions. And as you said it didn't loop good.
It got real repititive too. so,.... Good job though.

Jurian

TheReno responds:

It was never made to loop. xD Thanks for the review

[Beyond the Coast]

Liked the harp

What did you use to make it? Would fit Pirates of the Caribean goos, like going through a cave or something, leaving a friend alone. Great job, like the way the harp just keeps going and coming back stronger and stuff.

Jurian

Suspended-3rd-Chord responds:

Thank you Jurian! pirates of carribean eh? never thought of that, tho I take that as a compliment :D I use FL Studio for sequencing and East West symphony (with a sytrus pad used briefly in here0 for my sounds. Thanks for the review.